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The Artist - Julia Rachel Barrett Although the story is hot I did feel like something was missing. The whole section at the beginning where her husband has been away for 10 days & there is something going on with his family felt unfinished. I thought we would go back to that to find out what was going on - why doesn't his family like her? What is her brother in law up to? But we never got answers to any of my questions.

I felt like I needed answers or otherwise what was the point of even mentioning the husband's family in the first place? Or the story could have just focused on the dream fantasy which would have been fine too. Either way would have felt more like a full story.

The Artist wasn't a bad quick read though although it is very short.